Showing posts with label Week 4. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 4. Show all posts

Sunday, February 12, 2017

Feedback Focus

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The reading out loud technique is one I already use when I really don't feel like reading. I have to read out loud to keep myself engaged and I've found that not only does it work, but it makes me feel more interested in the reading, even if it's just a plain textbook chapter and not a story. I've also noticed that I retain more details when I read out loud and it makes studying easier.

I really liked the copy-and-delete technique. I think this will be helpful with longer pieces of writing because even if I'm focused and engaged I don't always remember what I read. I think this will be helpful in other classes too for when I need to read long chapters, I can break them up into days and just refer back to my notes, rather than trying to cram all the information in at once.

I really don't like the timer technique, at all. It stresses me out being timed and I start to focus more on what the time is on than how much I've read or retained. I found it strange that I don't like it though, because my whole day's to-do list is timed perfectly from the moment I wake up to the moment I go to bed. I think the timer is just a little too extreme and pulls my focus away from the reading more than it helps keeping my attention.

Sunday, February 5, 2017

Week 4 Story: The Life of Buddha Retold

The boy lived here peacefully until his death.
(Photo by Albert Bierstadt


There once was a wealthy couple who wanted a child very badly. Their dreams finally came true when they learned they would soon have a baby boy. They had big plans for their son. They wanted him to always be happy and so after he was born they made sure he never knew anything bad.

When the boy would go out and play, his father, a very powerful man in the town made sure the streets were clear of bad things. The boy never heard the words no. His parents sheltered him into thinking the world was perfect and nothing bad ever happened. He was spoiled on end and never experienced a moment of sorrow. The world was his oyster, until one day he came out and saw a strange man standing in the foyer.

He ran over to the man and asked him who he was. The man told the boy he had some very bad news. His parents were in a car accident, a very bad one and they did not survive. The boy did not understand what that meant. The man told the boy that sometimes people die sooner in life than expected. This is when the boy was introduced to death for the first time.

He was sent to live with his uncle. He was sad to learn that people did not live forever. Why didn’t his parents ever tell him? He was finally old enough to go to school. His first day was strange. Everyone was nice, but all he could think about was that one day these people would die, which made him very sad. He made a friend, a girl in his class. They were very close.

One day, his friend came to school with no hair. He was confused and asked her why she didn’t have hair. She told him that she was sick and that this sickness made her lose her hair. He was even more confused. He came home and asked his uncle about sickness. His uncle told him that people are not always healthy and sometimes it’s not their fault. Sometimes their bodies start to give up on them and it can happen at any given time. This was when the boy was introduced to disease and sickness.

His friend got worst. She started coming to school less and less. Eventually she stopped coming entirely. He missed her. He cried because he did not understand. Why was the world suddenly so sad? He could not understand. He would walk down the street and people would ask him for food and money. He didn’t know that not everyone had homes.

When he grew into his teenage years his uncle began to act strange. Sometimes he wouldn’t know who he was. He took his uncle to the doctor and the doctor told him that he was in the early stages of dementia. The boy did not understand. The doctor explains that with age, people’s minds sometimes grow weaker along with their health. He didn’t know the people got weaker as they grew older. He had only been getting stronger. He was then introduced to aging.


His uncle became so sick, he was bed ridden and the boy was distraught. He could not handle the evils of the world and he was angry at his parents for warning him about these evils. He ran away from home. He left his lavish lifestyle, because he realized that when his body gives up on him, he could not take any of it with him. He ran so far into the woods until he came across this beautiful valley. There animals, fruit trees, and a waterfall the fell right into a calm river. He made a home for himself and lived there until his last breath, away from all the evils of humanity.

Bibliography. Andre Ferdinand Herold. "The Life of Buddha." Web Source. 

Author's Note: The original story was basically about a prince whose parents sheltered him from all evil because they were told that he was sent from the Gods and he was omnipotent. They told him he had a great future so anytime the prince left his house the king would demand that the streets be cleaned up of evils (homeless people and sick people). The Gods didn't like that so they sent death, disease and aging his way. He couldn't take the evils and ran away to become a hermit. He found mediation and found he was powerful and he eventually became Buddha and found nirvana. I wrote my story about a wealthy boy who was so wealthy and spoiled by his parents that he couldn't adapt to the real world. I didn't give them names because I wanted the lesson to be more important than the characters. I just want to spread the message that it's normal to feel unhappiness and sometimes protecting the people you love from it can hurt them more in the future than it can help. I made the ending more realistic by letting him die because in reality we don't all get to turn into Buddha. 


Reading Notes: The Life of Buddha, Part B

The Prince became Buddha and he found the tree of knowledge.
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Prince Siddhartha left the palace in the middle of the night, with his horse, Kanthaka. He sends a servant back to send a message to his father. He tells him not to greieve and that he is to enter hermitage. He wants to destroy old age and death and he had to leave the palace to get away from unhappiness.

Gopa woke up suddenly and realized the prince was gone. She told the king and Mahaprajapti and the palace went searching for him. Chandaka came back with his belongings and informed the family he left to be a hermit. The prince entered hermitage and Arata Kalama taught them the doctrines. The prince does not agree with Arata Kalama's teachings and leaves. He set off to Magadha and mediated alone. He went on to Rajagriha and everyone recognized him as a god and the king was notified of his presence.

King Vimbrasara was informed that a God was begging in the streets. He went out and saw him. The king went after him and offered him his own palace but the prince, now known as the hero declined. He has no desire for riches, he now knows peace.

The hero went to look for the famous hermit, Rudraka to listen to his teachings but he quickly realized that Rudraka knew nothing of "true law" so he left. Siddhartha left to Nairanjana. He was contemplating so hard he forgot to breathe. The God thought he was dead and his mother Maya, who lived among the Gods thought so too. She covered his body in flowers and bowed three times. He mediated for six years. He did not move throughout any type of weather. He finally woke and found himself weak so he sought for food and people brought it to him. The five disciple that joined him found that he was a fool and did not lead anyone to the "path of true knowledge" so they all left him.

He climbed to the top of a mountain and descended. He woke up and realized he had supreme knowledge and that he would become Buddha. He found the tree of knowledge. He sat on the east side of the tree and bowed to it seven times. He sat down and crossed his legs.

He was glowing and Mara, the Evil one knew she was in trouble. She knew she wouldn't find refuge and she had no army or subjects. Mara was defeated and his men fled. Buddha found peace. He learned that if there was no birth, their could be no death. To suppress one thing is to suppress another. The earth shook twelve times and the Gods sang.

Bibliography. Andre Ferdinand Herold. "The Life of Buddha." Web Source. 

Reading Notes: The Life of Buddha, Part A

Birth of Prince Siddhartha 
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Queen Maya has a dream of a white elephant with six tusk falling from the sky and into her womb. She new then she would only know happiness. When she woke she went into the little wood and called for her husband, King Suddhodana. Upon his arrival he heard the thundering voices of the gods telling him "Be happy, King Suddhodana, worthiest of the Sakyas! He who seeks supreme knowledge is about to come into the world." They tell him they were chosen for their wealth and virtue. Queen Maya asks to see the brahmans, who will interpret her dreams. They told her good things, she fed the hungry, cured the sick, and everyone was happy. 

Prince Siddhartha was born. A hermit, Asita comes to see the boy. He sees signs of omnipotence and begins to cry. He cries because Prince Siddhartha will help a lot of people. He has a lot of power and we "will know great glory." Kapilavastu was a land of happiness, women gave birth with no suffering and neighbors lived peacefully with each other. That was until Queen Maya suddenly died and the price was given to her sister Mahaprajapti to be taken care of. She loved him like her own. 

He grew older and Mahaprajapati took him to the temple. As he entered the gods Siva, Skanda, Vishnu, Kuvera, Indra, and Brahma came to life from their statues. The Gods sang. 

Prince Siddhartha grew older and his teacher Visvamitra was teaching him the art of writing. His teacher then realized he had nothing to teach him. The prince went for a walk later that day and sat under the tree. He fell into a meditation and hermits passed and realized who he was. They saw that the shadow around that tree hadn't moved but they did everywhere else. The king came to find him and witnessed it himself. The prince came out of mediation and said he needs to seek great truths. 

The prince wanted to leave the palace so the king arranged it to make sure he could see nothing sad. He ordered beggers to be taken away from the roads and he can't see anyone who is sick and suffering. The Gods did not like that so they created a man to throw the prince off. The prince saw the man and learned of old age and that beauty and strength will not last forever. He saw aging as a threat. He then was introduced to disease and returns to the palace. The king attempts to show him joy again but the Gods disagree and introduce him to death. 

The prince began to shun all pleasure and wouldn't even smile at the maidens who threw their bodies at him and danced around him. He felt sad because no one was aware of aging, disease, or death. He asked his father to make four promises. "Promise me that my life will not end in death, that sickness will not impair my health, that age will not follow my youth, that misfortune will not destroy my prosperity." But his father said he could not. 

Bibliography. Andre Ferdinand Herold. "The Life of Buddha." Web Source.