Monday, January 23, 2017

Story Telling, Week 2 Story: Cupid and Psyche

Cupid and Psyche reuniting.
(Photo by Wikimedia Commons)



Cupid and Psyche: Retold 

There was a beautiful Princess, named Psyche. She was so beautiful, it was rumored she was actually the goddess, Venus. Because people believed she was Venus, they stopped worshipping her shrines and stopped celebrating holidays in her name. This made the real Venus very angry.

Venus came up with a plan to destroy Psyche. She sent her son, Cupid, to make her fall in love with him, only so he can leave her and break her heart. Although, Psyche was the most beautiful girl in the world, she was very lonely. No man felt worthy enough for her. She often spent her time alone, writing by the pond near her castle.

Cupid, following his mother’s orders, disguised himself as handsome prince. He approached her as she was sitting alone and began talking to her. He called himself, Prince Eros. The king and queen were suspicious because they’ve never heard of this prince before and the king banned Psyche from every seeing him again.

Psyche did not listen. She and Prince Eros would sneak around and meet at the pond every day. If they could not see each other they would have messengers deliver love letters to each other. Psyche was in love and so was Cupid. Cupid found himself in a dilemma. Should he break Psyche’s heart like his mother commanded or should he fight to be with Psyche? He knew that he could be no match for his mother, she was too powerful and she would always find him.

One day, Psyche was waiting by the pond for Prince Eros. He never showed up. She began crying, worried something might have happened to him. Then, approached a messenger. He handed her a letter and disappeared. She wept after reading the letter. Prince Eros told her he never loved her and that he was using her for her family’s fortune. He decided to give up and move on when he realized her parents would never let them be together.

She was so upset, she hung herself later that evening. The whole town was devastated by her death. The town and people from all over came to her funeral to worship because they still believed she was Venus. The death of Psyche caused the celebrations in Venus’s name to be canceled and the shrines were abandoned. It hurt the people too much to celebrate Psyche after her death.

This made Venus angrier. She thought surely by destroying Psyche, the people would forget about her and bring their attention back to Venus. But they did not. The people were in love with Psyche even after death.

Cupid was just as upset about his lover’s death. He was so upset he confessed to his mother everything, in hopes that she would punish him by making him mortal, and killing him. And that is exactly what she did.

Feeling betrayed Venus stripped Cupid of his bow and arrow and turned him into a mortal. She loved being powerful and loved being loved more than she loved her own son. She killed him by sword with her own hand. As he was dying he thanked his mother for killing him. Confused she questioned him. As he took his last breath, he told his mother that he could now be with his love, Psyche, forever.


Psyche and Cupid meet in a beautiful castle, in another world. Though, physically different, Psyche knew exactly who he was. They remained together for the rest of eternity, while Venus was left, uncelebrated and forgotten with time.

Bibliography. Apuleius. "Cupid and Psyche" Web Source. 

Author's Note: The original story was a lot more violent and Venus was relentless. Everyone also got a happy ending in the original story. Venus was jealous of Psyche and tortured her. But for some reason she decided that if Psyche were immortal she could be with Cupid, so she made Psyche immortal and decided she  somehow wasn't jealous anymore. It wasn't exactly discussed in the story how she got over her jealousy. But she got over it and Psyche and Cupid were married and had a baby named Pleasure. I decided to have Venus turn Cupid into a mortal and kill him instead of the other ending because I liked the idea of a tragic happy ending. I also think it is more realistic of Venus because in the original story she was selfish but randomly turned maternal at the end. I liked the idea of her staying selfish and evil, because I felt the maternal part didn't fit. So Venus kills her own son, however, Cupid and Psyche end up happily every after, because they end up together in their deaths. 

5 comments:

  1. Yeah, I've got to agree that Venus is a little weird in the original story, haha. That said, I think this story was nice, some parts in particular I liked were Cupid's internal conflict and his line of reasoning that led up to his decision to send the princess the letter, Cupid's incredible regret that led to him accepting and hoping for death as retribution for bringing Psyche to suicide, and Venus paying for her jealousy by having her plan backfire completely.

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  2. Hey Paulina! I really enjoyed reading this story! You are so creative! I love the star crossed lovers theme. I really enjoyed that it ended mostly happy. While yes, it was sad that they both died, I liked that you had them together in the end forever and Venus got what she deserved. I am excited to read more of your stories and see what you write about!

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  3. I really enjoyed this story! I haven't read the original story before so this story was rather unfamiliar to me. I was really surprised to hear that Psyche hung herself. I was wondering if Cupid wrote the letter or if his mother Venus wrote it pretending to be him? It wasn't completely clear from the story and I was curious about it. Also, what were her parents’ reactions to her death? Did they suspect that Cupid may have been involved in some way? What if her parents ended up questioning him to see if he knew anything about her death? You did a great job of showing how evil and crazy Venus could be. I like how in the end she ended up being unloved and forgotten in the end. I like how you went for the tragic ending approach. It was good to know that Cupid and Psyche ended up together after all.

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  4. I only vaguely knew about this story before I read yours, and I actually like yours better! You are right; it wouldn't really make sense for Venus to just suddenly be nice. I really liked the idea of the lovers getting a happy ending and the person responsible for their tragedy getting a not so happy one. Very creative ending!

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  5. I've written over Cupid and Psyche as well, though my story was taken from snippets rather than the entire story. I really liked your version of the story, more so than mine! You did great in how you ended it like a tragic happy ending as you stated. It almost reminded me of Romeo and Juliet, but not so much of a happy ending rather a tragic one. It was very well thought out and displayed. It was also an easy read!

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