Hey Paulina! I realized I commented on your intro already lol. Thank you for your comment and suggestion on my story! I would like an example on how I would title my entries to make it seem less confusing as well. As for the timeline portion, I meant for them to be set differently and not in chronological order as for each of their journey's began at different points in time. Meaning that the Eskimo had already been on his journey to the moon and the Raven just beginning his journey a few days after his mother passed. It was a bit confusing to write out but I still tried to match the days up in some ways. I hope that slightly clarifies things, thanks again!
Hey Paulina! I realized I commented on your intro already lol. Thank you for your comment and suggestion on my story! I would like an example on how I would title my entries to make it seem less confusing as well. As for the timeline portion, I meant for them to be set differently and not in chronological order as for each of their journey's began at different points in time. Meaning that the Eskimo had already been on his journey to the moon and the Raven just beginning his journey a few days after his mother passed. It was a bit confusing to write out but I still tried to match the days up in some ways. I hope that slightly clarifies things, thanks again!
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